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I would like to thank you and organization for the 00.00 donation towards my annual community event that happen last year. Your contribution helped make my event a success. We have arrival to this year’s 3rd Annual Hispanic Community Organization for Life Festival, which I am cordially inviting you and your organization to. My event has united my community to bridge the gap in support for one another. Many senior citizens have felt excited about the change that has been brought to the community through the Hispanic Community Organization. My organization have reframe the youth prospective in doing more positive activities, which gear towards more positive outcomes. This year’s event will begin the foundation of what my organization represent and stabilize my community with unity forever. (Gentlemen Name), your contribution of 00.00 towards my annual event will give me the funding I need to expand my event to many people who have accepted the change. Our senior citizens, youth, low-income families and children are in need of a health care plan that will given them a more reliable source that will make doctor visit more effective. I believe your organization can make a pivotal impact on this event with your present, to guide many more people in obtaining a more valuable health care plan. I am excited to have your assistance in support of my 3rd annual festival. If you wish to discuss any further details, please feel free to contact me via phone.
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I would like to thank you and the organization for the $1000.00 donation towards my annual community event, that happen last year. Your contribution helped make the event a success. We have arrived to this years 3rd Annual Hispanic Community Organization for Life Festival. I am cordially inviting you and your organization to this event. The event has united the community to bridge the gap and support one another. Many senior citizens have felt excited about the change that has been brought to the community through the Hispanic Community Organization. The organization has reformed the youth prospective in doing more positive activities, which gear towards more positive outcomes. This years event will begin the foundation of what the organization represents and stabilizes the community with unity forever. (Gentlemen Name), your contribution of $2000.00 towards the annual event will give me the funding I need to expand my event to many people who have accepted the change. Our senior citizens, youth, low-income families and children are in need of a health care plan that will give them a more reliable source that will make doctor visit more effective. I believe your organization can make a pivotal impact on this event. Also, to guide many more people in obtaining a more valuable health care plan. I am excited to have your assistance in support of the 3rd annual festivities. If you wish to discuss any further details, please feel free to
contact me via phone.
It sounds more professional if you use "the" organization rather than "my" organization.
November 16th, 2009 at 2:13 am