Our event has hopefully impacted the community by focusing on strengthening positive values and create a safer and more supportive environment [FORWHOM}. We are gearing up to change the mind set of our youth. We want them to know that goals are obtainable with hard work and willpower. We have raised the bar for our community through the Hispanic Community Organization. Our young people have chosen a path to succeed.

Many of our senior citizens feel at ease walking with community members who guide and support one another. Much of this could not be done with out funding sources that have helped bolster this event.

(gentlemen Name), We would be pleased to receive your contribution of $2000.00 to give more hope to a community that has joined together to make necessary improvements, to give our young people and our senior citizens a more vibrant outlook in our environment.

We look forward in speaking with you and providing more detailed information about this annual event. Feel free to contact me either via email or telephone.

It is with great pleasure that I write to you on behalf of the Hispanic Community Organization for Life. We will host our third annual celebration July 25, 2009, from 9:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. In the past, our event has influenced the community to strengthen positive values in order to increase the presence of a safe and supportive environment for (insert who is being made safe here). Our goal is to change the mindset of our youth to believe that their dreams are attainable through hard work and motivation. We have improved the standards of our community through the organization, and many of our youth have chosen to succeed in their chosen endeavors. Likewise, many senior citizens are able to feel safe while spending time guiding and supporting other community members.

This could not have been achieved without the generous funding from community members who have helped the organization to prosper and create the foundation of this community. Because of this, we respectfully ask you to consider making a donation of $2,000 to provide hope to a community that has joined together to make essential improvements that have given the youth and senior citizens a more dynamic outlook in their environment.

Our representatives look forward to speaking with you and providing more detail about our annual event. You may reach us via email or phone at your convenience.

Thank you,
(Your Name)

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It sounded like you were asking for a donation – is that correct? If not, I can rewrite it as a thank you note.

This event encourages the strengthening of positive values and the creation of a safer and more supportive environment within the community. Our aim is to empower our youth to believe that with hard work their goals are obtainable and their potential is unlimited.

The Hispanic Community Organization has been instrumental in bringing about great improvements within the community. Many of our young people have chosen to embark on the path to success in the endeavors they have chosen. Also, our senior citizens now feel at ease when out in the community with our members to guide and support them and to help create a safe and friendly environment.

This work which creates a strong foundation for out community could not be done without your generous support. (gentlemen Name), we ask for your contribution of $2000.00 in order to help give hope to a community that has joined together to give our younger generation and our senior citizens a more vibrant outlook.

We look forward to speaking with you soon and providing more details about our annual event. Please feel free to contact me via email or telephone should you have any questions. Thank you for your thoughtful consideration of our request.